shaXPp 发表于 2023-5-23 12:36   全显示 1楼
文章确实很虐心，跟苦主聊天没看出来有这么重口，但是感觉文章心理描写不够细致，有一些情节和话的设置感觉有些为虐而虐，调教和肉戏太少，虽然是虐心为主但是还是需要这些部分增加真实感和虐心的深度。苦主奴性很重可以着重描写心里活动，那种能让人抱有苦涩又刺激的矛盾心理才是佳作。整体爽点还是很足，虽然我作为绿主看来没啥感觉，还需苦主自己评论，对我来说可能有点过于寡淡。


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