pimp1234 发表于 2021-5-20 09:02   全显示 1楼
樓主的文章還是老問題，雖然調教後的描寫很不錯，但是鋪墊過於簡單，黑人的催眠能力具體要怎麼實現，怎麼一步一步可以把女主角洗腦，這中間又有什麼變化的過程。都是沒有交代，一下子轉入調教接近成功的章節。希望以後還是能改善一下


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